Writing Prompt: Find a
news article and write from the POV of those involved in the conflict.
Gray rectangles speckled the dusty and arid landscape
below the craft; occasionally flares of white light would shine off the
metallic roof tops into the crafts camera. I circled around the village
maintaining a high enough altitude that even the locals wouldn’t be able to
spot my craft in the bright and clear skies. I disregarded the ever growing
tails of dust behind the cars on the road. I wasn’t looking for any suspicious
cars, well not yet at least. What I was looking for amongst the backdrop of red
and brown detailed with specs of civilization was a building large enough to
hold over three hundred people and the armed men who made sure none could
leave.
Three monitors lined the desk in front of me, the main
monitor showed the forward camera of the craft separated into blue and brown
hue halfway across the screen. On my right a screen displayed my geographical
data, local weather and time, and my craft’s status such as speed and altitude.
To the left were additional cameras: rear view and ground. My eyes floated
between all three.
“Washington,
do you have an visuals?” Captain Garrison’s voice said through the transceiver.
I could hear the whistling of the air as it sped by outside his cockpit.
“No
sir,” I said taking a drink of my McDonald’s coffee. I flinched back, the taste
was too bitter; they forgot to give me double sugar like I asked.
“Who
exactly am I speaking to at the moment?”
“This
is Airman First Class Frederick Williams,” I said.
“Good
morning then Williams, how’s the coffee taste?”
“What
is that sir?”
“How
does your coffee taste, what is it like four hundred there?”
“Actually
five sir,” I said checking my watch.
“Listen
that doesn’t matter, what matters is that you’re awake and your eyes are on the
screen. You are awake aren’t you?”
“Yes
sir!” I said reflexively.
“Good,
I’ll be checking back in ten.”
The
airwaves dived to silence. After giving the village a fly around I decided it
was time to move onto another. I consulted an digital map and selected the
nearest village, leaned back in my chair letting the autopilot take over and
took some more coffee. My eyes felt heavy and my stomach begged for something
to eat through a series of gurgles and growled, I wish I bought a McGriddle on
the way to the office.
In
my head I knew this was important, three hundred girls had been kidnapped and
threatened to be sold into slavery, but I didn’t feel it. Maybe if I was in the
sky like Garrison I wouldn’t feel so indifferent, but nope. I joined the air
force to fly planes not play video games. At least I was helping somehow.
“Williams!”
Garrison’s voice rang through my headset.
“Yes
sir?”
“Are
you falling asleep over there? We’ve already done a fly by over there, get your
act together or drink stronger coffee.”
“S-sorry
sir,” I said.
“Head
north, and don’t you fall asleep.”
I
consulted the map and leaned back into my chair. At least I was helping…
somehow.
Nice details.I enjoyed the narrative but I was confused on where the narrator is. Shouldn't all the people be on the ground and I don't get if he is in the air or on the ground. Why would he be drinking McDonalds coffee anyways? I like the concept of being tired while flying but it wasn't clear enough. I think we should try editing some of our work in the future for practice.
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